Antigone
Presented by: Purely Pensive Productions
Venue: Eltham College of Performing Arts Centre, Research
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Reviewer: Kym Davies
Date Reviewed: 9th November, 2007

I was not really sure what to expect from the Purely Pensive adaptation of King Oedipus and Antigone, originally crafted by the Greek master Sophocles in around 400BC, and one of the oldest and truly universal pieces of theatre ever created. It was certainly very courageous to take on such a challenge.

Jeremy Ives (Adaptor and Director) has attempted to translate this ancient story for a modern youth audience, with mixed results.

The first act focused on integrating the story of King Oedipus and his downfall into the story of the demise of his grown children, specifically his youngest child, Antigone.  Most of the language and concepts used within the act were of a contemporary nature and Jeremey introduced language and issues important to young people today.

In this version, Oedipus cuts his eyes out when he discovers his beloved wife, Jocasta, has been unfaithful with his rival, Creon, and his family is shamed. In the original, Creon and Jocasta are brother and sister, and Jocasta is really Oedipus’ mother and wife and his children, including Antigone, are a product of incest. This was an interesting and a brave change to the story base and underlying tensions.

The second act consisted mainly of the original dialogue from Oedipus at Colonus and Antigone with some changes and adaptations to the basic story. Antigone does not die alone but is executed on Creon’s orders in the final scene. The increased use of the original text was unexpected after the first act and was a little confusing style wise.

Clearly Jeremy was attempting to explore light and dark within the tragedy, to create a world that is relevant to the audience. He should be congratulated on the attempt, but such a story only works because of the cathartic effect it can have on the audience. The tragedy should be intense and any comedy should only come from the natural ironies of the human condition.

Overall, the story worked well and the focus on the themes of family and honour were well received by the audience. I would suggest however with any adaptation, direction and production design that consistency in choosing a theatrical style and sticking to it is very important to capture and retain the suspension of disbelief required from the audience.

Purely Pensive are fairly new on the amateur scene and are presented as a youth company, I was therefore surprised to find such a wealth of training, experience and credits listed in the program biographies. Jeremy was certainly very lucky to have such experience on hand for his directing debut.

The acting performances varied across the emsemble but included some amazing individual moments and certainly some impressive potential.

The most outstanding performance of the night must go to the leading lady, Antigone, played with intensity and sensitivity by the very talented Erin Brass. Her performance was measured and filled with a maturity and strength that was quite compelling to watch. Antigone is a complex character and the centre of the world of the original play and this adaptation. A woman driven by her conscience and the love of her family, she is the catalyst of the story and drives the drama throughout. A big thanks must go to Erin for providing a solid base for the show to build on, her performance, and in particular the final speech showed strength and a real humanity.

Other performances of note came from an understated Julian Campobasso as Colonus and from Portia Chiminello as the pitiful Phoebe Labdadus. Both supporting roles were played with great focus and intensity by these two. The two matriarchs of apposing families also stood out among the cast. Evelyn Vila as the condemned Jocasta, cut a tragic and cold figure, while Beck Burrows in the role of Eurydice Argives had a solid and effective presence on stage.

The most effective individual moment came from Shane Sanfilippo as Oedipus. The scene in which Oedipus confronts his children after he has cut out his own eyes was a credit to this young actor. This was a very difficult moment on stage to deliver and Shane’s portrayal was focused and committed. In fact the whole cast should be congratulated on dealing with the intense emotion through out the play with such conviction and believability.

From a production perspective the cast were let down by some inconsistent direction and style choices and an enthusiastic but over eager crew. Quite a few cast members could not project past the front row and unfortunately some dialogue was lost. I loved the idea of Zeus as a real living statue, but this was incompatible with the overall style. The scene in which Polynices and Eteocles kill each other would have worked better using guns instead of swards, as the use of the gun in the final scene worked extremely well. Again a lot of the staging choices were conflicting and confusing, even bordering on farcical.

Jeremy should however be proud of the pace and tension he managed to build throughout the show and the characterisations he has developed with the cast. The use of music throughout created a certain mood and enhanced the concept of family and love lost, while using projected images of the family album at the start of each act created a melancholy feeling that transcended into the action.

I enjoyed this show and would encourage any one wanting to attempt to bring classic theatre like this to a new audience to not hold back. Well done to Purely Pensive Productions for the attempt and thanks for giving young thespians the chance to work on such interesting and innovative material.


Kym has a Bachelor of Arts-Drama from LaTrobe University and since then has been heavily involved in all facets of theatre, both on and off stage. Her Directing credits include King Oedipus with BATS, Popcorn with Dandenong Theatre Company Inc, Lottery with BATS for the Melbourne Fringe Festival and Short and Sweet Communities Festival. Her extensive acting credits include Belinda in Noises Off, Farrah in Popcorn, Truvy in Steel Magnolias, Mavis in Dimboola, Titania in A Midsummer Night’s Dream and Susan in Dons Party. Kym’s talents extend to Production, Set and Costume Design with many credits including Lottery, Sweeney Todd, Fame, The King and I, Dinkum Assorted, Gypsy, Hamlet, A Midsummer Night’s Dream, Steel Magnolias, Popcorn and Noises Off.

 

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